New Sisters Post

So I've posted a new part to my serial I'm writing. I'm gonna be posting a new part every week. If you have missed any parts (there's only one other part at the moment) you can find them in the Archives section. This project is a work in progress and what I really want to get out of this is sort of a collaborative learning process.

I have all these stories in my head and have never built up the gumption to commit them to any sort of media. It's time I cultivate new creative outlets and get my work out there. I'm doing this, of course, by throwing myself entirely out there and braving the Internet maelstrom to become a better writer, artist, and commentator. So any feedback to help me become a better writer will be absolutely welcome.

Thank in advance to all!